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Mm... Sorry if anything I said would get you mad, overall, it seems good but a couple of places made it not making sense.
1. The soldiers faces have no color, seems like you havent work on the faces yet
2. the bricks on the wall are too "plastic" (i am not saying bad word, I mean the actual material, plastic)
Imagine, if you are in the middle of a war, will the wall be so "clean"? some of the bricks should be hanging on the wall, and the rest of them should looks sharper.
Maybe if you add some sand on it and color them, it maybe better
3. The mobile suit arm is good on the coloring, but it looks like the arm fell off because it wasnt attached right, I am sure you wanted to make it look like got cut off from the mobile suit,
so now all you are missing on the arm is the cut and burn mark. it shouldn't still have that attaching point on it, so i would suggest you cut it off
Again, sorry if i said too much
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