okay... first of all... I am not really good at all...
so next time don't need to point out my name...
since u requested... here are the stuff u ask 4 it...
lets go thought it together... shall we...
Photo A
1.) the silver isn't smooth enough...
2.) for the silver... u don't use those color to make it old or battled... I will say use Black is much better as result...
Photo B
1.) the Blue color on the helmet... did u use the same color to make it look a bit old??? again use black on those blue...
2.) that is not right with the painting style...
look at this photo and see how i did with the silver...
Photo C
1.) MOLDLINE and GAP... how many times I have to tell u...
2.) the whole model is fine with me... beside the pair of eye... they just don't match IMO...
hope this could help u out...